Matt Bellamy

Best part: lone liness (Even the "lone" is isolated form "liness") I think Cicero has thoroughly critiqued this :P but, I will say, as a reader I felt intimidated. And ...

I liked the way you described things ironically-children without fathers, beaches without water. However, widows obviously don't have husbands, otherwise they wouldn't be widows. Maybe change it to wi

I liked the idea of this, but I think there were too many dots......too many exclamation marks and question marks, and too many capitals at the end. Writing should be ...

Last line of part six made me laugh. It's a serious piece but...hehe. I liked it. Maybe some of the swear words were unneccessary-used in moderation they would have more ...

Awwwwwww that's lovely! Well. Actually it was okay. Pretty good. I liked the casual tone. "I can almost feel you in my heart" I think the almost is important here, ...

"there, I just vomited live in Technicolor rainbows all over your front lawn. Are you happy now?" I really like that :) Made me laugh a little. Great tone. Also ...

Nice one Greggerg. A couple of things I'm not sure about, like the use of "it's like..." Seems kind of conversational and doesn't seem to really fit, I think "Darkness ...

Ack, I don't get it but I like it! It's sexy and very descriptive, very colourful-blue alien, red devil, thrusting into the dark. Seems quite playful at times-"sexiest, you demon". ...

Well, the first line certainly grabbed my attention. Leapt straight into what you wanted to say, that was good. Loved the last stanza, it was like, he chokes on the ...

I found this quite suspensful (is that a word?). I liked the way the poem was very drawn out, for its length, and found myself thinking until the end, "what ...

Ooooh. o.O I liked the way you built up suspense in this and made the reader ask questions, a good start that makes the reader want to find out more. ...

Ooh, this is good. Very well written, and there's a lot going on in it...lots to take in. It's good, it has depth. Plus, I liked the way you put ...

I really liked the stye of this. Great use of repetition. I especially liked as I fall asleep, a light ray to a light ray, and dream of you, you ...

Well, just to confuse you, I am going to say I have a completely different opinion to Dreami :) I liked the style of your poem, I liked the run ...

I liked the style of this, it's so juvenile (sp?). The lack of commas and grammar in places created something that otherwise would have been crap if the whole concept ...